Not the one (teshara) wrote,
Not the one
teshara

So, I wrote a bit of poetry for a Bowie tribute.

I need concrit.

http://teshara.tumblr.com/post/137312025445/stop-all-of-time-silence-the-cock-stop-the

Also, I took the poem Funeral Blues and changed the words. I say it's transformative work and credit is given.

Mark says if you change the words in a poem, even if it has the same cadence, it's original work. I don't believe I changed enough to call it original, but I think a discussion on where the line is drawn for that type of thing would be very interesting, so go ahead.

Tags: concrit, david bowie, poetry, tribute
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